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Brushing your thumb against my bottom lip,
Pull my face up in your hands for a kiss.
Your warm, strong arms wrap around me.
This I remember when you're gone and I'm lonely.
I twist the ring on my finger,
Your scent from this morning lingers.
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I remember rubbing your lips with my teeth.
The clock strikes five. I can't even
Think about dinner until my hunger is sated.
My hands clasp your face as our clothes
Disappear without a trace.
Pull my face up in your hands for a kiss.
Your warm, strong arms wrap around me.
This I remember when you're gone and I'm lonely.
I twist the ring on my finger,
Your scent from this morning lingers.
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I remember rubbing your lips with my teeth.
The clock strikes five. I can't even
Think about dinner until my hunger is sated.
My hands clasp your face as our clothes
Disappear without a trace.
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Tacos
Tacos are a food of creating new things.
The fillings are kindness and a boost of self esteem.
The sauces are sass and compliments.
The wrapped is nights at a sushi restaurant and working together.
Because tacos are the food that create the most beautiful things.
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The Election
The Election
Once in a country not very far away,
An election was coming in a couple of days,
Three candidates with three agendas had set out to run,
The people would choose when the campaigning was done.
Billionaire Donald lived in a tower of gold,
His ego defied logic and his words were so bold,
He intimidated his opponents spewing fear to win,
and promised to make America great again.
Hillary lied at her rallies and acted true blue,
Pantsuit would preach equality as systemic racism grew,
Minorities flocked to her for overdue civil rights,
While her Foundation sold out to other countries every night.
Sweet Bernie cared for the tall and
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the rhythmic tapping of keyboard running
my being is letters
yet i cannot make words
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Okay it's mandatory study hour at my scholarship program but I can't focus for shit.
I know one of the lines don't rhyme but hey it's poetic license lol, I'm not sure how to fix it.
Please leave feedback, I feel like this is unfinished:
HOW DO YOU AS THE READER THINK IT SHOULD BE FINISHED???
Thank you for reading. Do not steal, or karma will slap you. Thanks once again.
I know one of the lines don't rhyme but hey it's poetic license lol, I'm not sure how to fix it.
Please leave feedback, I feel like this is unfinished:
HOW DO YOU AS THE READER THINK IT SHOULD BE FINISHED???
Thank you for reading. Do not steal, or karma will slap you. Thanks once again.
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactOkay lets see.
The start is good. It explains both aspects that you were with someone and loved him and also that you remember him a lot; it gives a slight hint as if he has gone for a long time but one cannot be sure over it. It is good since it doesn't get too romantic but still expresses emotions.
The second stanza starts fine, but the last line is like... "hmmm.... ok but it doesn't go well". The last line is like you repeating the first stanza again.
The third stanza suits wella s a continuation of the second stanza, but the last two lines should start another stanza and the third stanza should explain your feelings of love like no hunger or whatever.
The last stana should go on when he comes back and you are not lonely any more and you both well... you can go romantic or you can just end it subtly. I like the poem over all and would hope that you do a good job with it!