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White

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White, Black
White, Black

Puerto Rican, Asian
Native American,
The Original American,
Me.

Who is seen as White as a sheet of paper.
Who cannot dance or talk of deep things.
White has been sealed into a vacuum, wispy like vapors.
Someone who's just a color and has a culture of nothing.

White, not caucausian. White like the crayon that no one uses.
White, one dimensional, trivial, and ultimately superficial.
From what I have heard, White is the winner that never loses.
The ultimate opponent, the one no one can touch, it's become conditional.

As a White woman, I "must" be better.
You probably think I sit and write high and mighty.
White has all the money, gets all the jobs; White cannot be deterred.
White doesn't have "real" problems, never deals with anything frightening.

It's good to be White, it must be nice.
Never to be discriminated against, no judge watching.
White has it all, right?
But no one sees White is just like other minorities.

White, Black
White, Black

Colors that name us. Labels that deface us.
Made up assumptions that persuade feeble minds.
Controlling society these "names" destroy trust.
We still discriminate like we have throughout time.

As a White woman, I am judged by the color of my skin.
People look at me differently like they expect something.
Good or bad, it feels painful to wear the mask that grins.
I don't know what you want or what you're expecting.

I'm just me, just a girl who like you has some scars.
I'm just a girl, not a color. Someone with dreams.
I'm just a girl, who has stumbled in the dark.
I'm just a  girl, who is not what she always seems.
I'm in college now. Not on here as often as I like. I've been wanting to write a race poem for a long time. But I never knew how to write the words. This is as close as I could get. It's not perfect and it needs work but be gentle please.

The reason behind this is that I think people judge you no matter what. Everyone judges, I admit that I do. At my old job almost everyone I worked with was Haitian or African American or Hispanic. Not many whites. I got judged because I was the only white girl in my department.
In my summer program I am one white out of fifteen. Fifteen white out of two fifty. It's interesting to be the minority (that statement reads in bad taste but it's true.) I get discriminated against. I was talking to a guy and we were talking about dancing. He said it didn't matter that I couldn't dance anyway because I was white. Another time a girl was talking about how white people get everything.
Stuff like this makes me upset. People shouldn't see race or gender or sexuality as a means to judge them.

Please help me edit this. Thank you for reading.
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This is a nice poem based on a topic much discussed; racism. The most prominent of clashes as well, black and white.

Now the theme is very typical YET the way you have imposed it, it seems good. You have brought it up from a different perspective i.e. rather than talking about the good things, or similarities you have stated that white is not as good as people think it is and it actually causes problems for a girl like you. Good.

Having said that, I am fine with the expressions and the rhyme at times is good as well. But the meter varies a bit (not very much )so see if you can work on it. Otherwise I like the work in itself <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> keep it up!